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it starts off all twisted,
artistic and meek.
the sheets in a tangle, we tangoed,
in the sleek night.
our wrists chained to floarboards,
im pumping.
again, oh
im thumping.
along
past my collarbone's palindrome,
(that sensitive hollow)
making impressions in memory foam.
onetwo, and threefour.
yes, go on-
rest your head here, and read what you wrote.
remember last night,
when that spot in my chest soared up past my throat,
and the light in your eyes
swallowed my conscience alive,
oh god-
and we burned,
with the stars
I spun.
and cared not to dream, but be rash: come undone.
precariously hung,
on the bedpost.
we sang amid silence,
clutching at pillows and pretense,
feeding black scarves on my eyelids.
needing a breath-
as i sank,
shining red-
through my webbed primidorial,
to the safety of bloodshed.

©2003-2009 ~justaphase
:iconjustaphase:

Author's Comments

It rhymes. Its mindless. So sue me. It really does have a purpose... but hell if i know the true exten of that. So im regressing in style. Its alright. Spoken word is like my security blanket. This is the part i can say plainly.

Daily Deviation

Given 2004-01-22

Abject Genteel by ~justaphase don't click this without grabbing a quad shot of espesso and a handful of chocolate espresso beans. and make sure the shock paddles are by your bedside. deftly guest picked by ~substanceabuse (Featured by `keen)

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:iconsubstanceabuse:
yes yes yes yes.
oh i've been waiting for something from you, not to be disappointed.
one thing, did you mean "floorboards" instead of "floarboards"?
"clutching at pillows and pretenses"

but good god yes. this is delicious, like sauteed mushrooms.

--
it's the beginning of the song god forgot to write.
:iconpainfetish:
mmm yum

--
make me sad. make me mad. make me feel alright?
:iconlivingbyair:
It's good to read you again.

and we burned,
with the stars
I spun.
and cared not to dream, but be rash: come undone.
precariously hung,
on the bedpost.

lovely. :P
:icondrivedeadslow:
I missed your postings but this made up for it, you and words are like tim kasher and conor oberst which makes sense to only me.

this is what I try to write whenever I attempt to let anything flow, I blush with envy

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valentine <3 I want to feel your hips pressed up against mine
:iconshooshooky:
neato, i think its full of 'good' thoughts, but to keep this simple the first thing it reminded me of was Thunper the rabbit from Bambi, i think,...just cause I haven't seen that word in a while "...thumping"
hahaha..Bambi, im probably soooo far off from anything this might mean

--
Nestea
Cool
To the Core
:typerhappy:
:iconinebriate:
I caught a few spelling errors (possibly intentionally done for rhyme's sake, but I'm just callin' it as I see), and a couple words that could be dropped for general ease in read, but this was one of the better things I've read in weeks. Thank you.

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:iconrepus:
very nice indeed. this got my blood pumping..:kiss:

--
writers bleed words...

freewill
over
fate...

...which do you choose (pick one)
:icongomen:
This is really fucking cool.

--
Jealousy.
:iconladynyk:
Oooh I love good spoken word. Wonderful wonderful flow and aliteration.. I've really missed reading you, hon!

--
Nyk

Check out ~ekg His words weave the mundane into magick..
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\"I Tell You: One must still have chaos in one to give birth to a dancing star!\" ~ Nietzsche

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